The first group video that was prepared for the YMCA presentation is shown above. We did not get to show this video as my scene only finished rendering after the presentation, and some of the files that had been saved on Premier Pro didn't seem to work properly which was a shame. As you can see there are a lot of mistakes and tweaking needs to be done to my scene, as well as other members' of the group.
Mistakes/changes needed to be made:
- Rich's room (4th scene) is the only scene to have silhouette's with question marks on them and others don't. At the time we thought this would be a good idea as it shows that anyone could join the YMCA, it gives the impression that the person 'could be you'. This meant that it wouldn't portray a certain stereotype; backgrounds they're from, gender or dress sense for example, so anyone is welcome to join. We will need to all have question marks on our silhouettes for the final version, or take Rich's off. His camera angles also seem a bit too slow but this will be easy to adjust.
- My room (1st scene), has several errors. The whole camera movement was too slow, some of the angles were not right, as it showed too much of some of the silhouette's just standing there until they were key framed to animate which didn't look good! The ball at the very beginning also doesn't animate well or fully as it just seems to drop on the floor. The silhouette playing with the hoop also does a 'matrix effect' when they start to throw the hoop, it is also far too slow and does a weird movement. All these will be changed in the final version by making the camera move faster, as well as editing the animations of each silhouette.
- My nursery room goes from right to left into Maria's (2nd scene), however, Maria's room then starts from left to right which doesn't flow at all. The camera speed is also a bit too fast, and the reactor tool for her bowling pins falling over doesn't seem to work, they seem to fall before the bowling ball even hits the pins. We have also noticed one of the silhouette's hand goes through the guitar when it is playing, so these mistakes will need to be changed.
- Luke's room (3rd scene) is missing some tables and chairs. However apart from that minor issue, everything seems to be flowing fine.
- There is no music!! This will be added in the final.
Presentation Thoughts:
I have to say I feel that our presentation for this went terribly. We had it all planned out what was going to be said, but this didn't work out as we had major issues with some of the programs not working/loading properly, some scenes didn't render out in time and some of the work that was meant to have been shown for the presentation didn't seem to save onto the memory stick, so we all felt let down with ourselves and was completely thrown off with what we were going to say.